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		<title>By: Paul</title>
		<link>http://jay-photo.com/blog/2005/03/07/pencil/comment-page-1/#comment-66</link>
		<dc:creator>Paul</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 22 Mar 2005 07:00:17 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Wow.</description>
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		<title>By: Dave</title>
		<link>http://jay-photo.com/blog/2005/03/07/pencil/comment-page-1/#comment-53</link>
		<dc:creator>Dave</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 09 Mar 2005 04:35:15 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Yes, nice job Jay. </description>
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		<title>By: Jay</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jay</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 09 Mar 2005 01:02:42 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thank you.

I did get that all from a pencil.  I used a brainstorming technique called &quot;mapping&quot; (and other things) where you write down a word and then write down everything that pops into your head related to any word on the paper.  I wrote down &quot;Write&quot; and then two words branched off of that: &quot;Create&quot; and &quot;Freedom&quot;.  As I kept going, I ended up with &quot;Eraser&quot; on the sheet immediately underneath &quot;Freedom&quot;.

I started writing the story at that point, not quite sure where it was going to go.  I started with a prisoner because that&#039;s pretty much the opposite of freedom.  The memory twist didn&#039;t actually occur to me until a little into the dialog (although I had already written that he didn&#039;t remember his name).

The story was also influenced a bit by [Flowers for Algernon](http://www.danielkeyesauthor.com/algernon.html) -- a much better story. :) Highly recommended.

I still don&#039;t know what I&#039;m going to do with &quot;grunion&quot;.  Maybe a haiku...  &quot;Blank&quot; has a ton of potential.  Maybe there&#039;s a novel there. ;)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thank you.</p>
<p>I did get that all from a pencil.  I used a brainstorming technique called &#8220;mapping&#8221; (and other things) where you write down a word and then write down everything that pops into your head related to any word on the paper.  I wrote down &#8220;Write&#8221; and then two words branched off of that: &#8220;Create&#8221; and &#8220;Freedom&#8221;.  As I kept going, I ended up with &#8220;Eraser&#8221; on the sheet immediately underneath &#8220;Freedom&#8221;.</p>
<p>I started writing the story at that point, not quite sure where it was going to go.  I started with a prisoner because that&#8217;s pretty much the opposite of freedom.  The memory twist didn&#8217;t actually occur to me until a little into the dialog (although I had already written that he didn&#8217;t remember his name).</p>
<p>The story was also influenced a bit by [Flowers for Algernon](http://www.danielkeyesauthor.com/algernon.html) &#8212; a much better story. <img src='http://jay-photo.com/blog/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' />  Highly recommended.</p>
<p>I still don&#8217;t know what I&#8217;m going to do with &#8220;grunion&#8221;.  Maybe a haiku&#8230;  &#8220;Blank&#8221; has a ton of potential.  Maybe there&#8217;s a novel there. <img src='http://jay-photo.com/blog/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_wink.gif' alt=';)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>By: alissa</title>
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		<dc:creator>alissa</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 08 Mar 2005 20:51:21 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>You got that from a pencil?!

That was most disturbing.  Especially since I actually feel like that most of the time these days.  What were we just talking about?

Nicely done.  And very sad.</description>
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<p>That was most disturbing.  Especially since I actually feel like that most of the time these days.  What were we just talking about?</p>
<p>Nicely done.  And very sad.</p>
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